This is an older drwing I attempted to fix.  I think it's more physically correct unfortunately though it's a bit less aesthetically pleasing.

I realise the single shade of green that everything is, is far from appealing, but when I colored it I had very limited options and tools to work with so please excuse that. Other than that this is my first upload so let me have it.

          So, first thing's first my name is Ryan.  I recently started to draw pretty frequently as a hobby, and while admittedly I'm not that good I'd like to get better that's why I'm here.  Any constructive criticism is welcome it is pretty much the only reason I made this account so don't be shy, not that I think that'll be a problem.  Thanks in advance for any future advice, constructive criticism, or other joy you may bring to my day, bye for now.